Saturday, 10 November 2012

The Fall


Life as I know it,
It ain’t too bad yet ain’t  too good,
Feeling as if the fall will never
End; I land realizing there was nothing ever wrong.

2 comments:

  1. Kaymin, I love this poem that u wrote! I think that it is amazing. The wording is right and the flow of it makes sense. I think that I can relate to this poem in a way.

    Sammie <3

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  2. I agree with Sam. Well done. Simple, direct, carefully chosen words= powerful. Good to see you back in the mix and blogging.

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